Coursework - Preliminary Video - Learner Response

1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class.

Teacher WWW:
-excellent branding and logo
-very good post production
-dissolves + ghosting
-jump cuts
-slo mos
-composition/framing
-great cinematography
-range of locations/settings
-very good long shots
-on screen graphic at end
-good structure/narrative song

Teacher EBI:
-Close ups?
-Question mark to lyrics at end
-remake logo

Class WWW:
-good pace
-iconography
-vertical aspect ratio
-flickering lights cool
-cool editing and fade stuff
-good range of shots
-ate, leng song, amazing shots, body tea, editing, just great
-i love the aesthetic! Very good editing and cinematography
-good theme carried through video
-editing ate overlaying of videos
-matched the song
-lyrics + logo on screen
-included conventions of music video

Class EBI:
-too dark sometimes
-almost got us stabbed in the dark but we found a cat so its okay
-could be more shots of you the artist
-logo

2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points and three EBI bullet points for your work.

WWW:

-Matched the theme of the song with the editing and narrative
-good pace which fit the song
-good post production

EBI:

-sometimes a bit too dark since I put the exposure down
-change the logo
-add a question mark to the lyrics at end


3) How effectively did you complete the objective you laid out in your mini preliminary exercise statement of intent?
I think I did quite well executing it however I did change what I did while filming a bit since it helped the video flow better than what I originally planned

4) What have you learned from the preliminary exercise that will help you in the actual coursework project?
What I have learned is to make sure I have enough clips and check through what I've filmed just in case something has gone wrong, since I had the exposure too low which resulted in dark videos

5) Now you have completed the preliminary exercise, will you change anything about your actual coursework video plan? This could include your concept, cast/actors or technical elements such as mise-en-scene, camerawork or editing.

I think I will keep it similar however I will change some elements like the logo and the text so that it fits the video better.