Coursework - Ignite Presentation - Learner Response

1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each of the categories. 

28/30 !!!

Research: 4 because my statement intent wasn't to 500 words

Concept: 5

Media Language: 4

Representation: 5

Audience+Industry: 5

Delivery: 5

WWW: 

-Positive start

-Good audience consideration

-Excellent concept, good detail

-Link to audience, enigma codes

-Well designed slides + excellent use of images

-Good presentation style + good pace

-Representation theory

-Gauntlett- generational difference linked to billboard

-Audience theory linked to examples

EBI:

-statement of intent not 500 words it was 415...

-more detail for second billboard slide

2) Use this feedback, comments from peers and your own reflection on your presentation to self-assess and write your own detailed WWW and EBI for your coursework concept and presentation as a whole.

WWW:

-very good day thank you

-very dubai chocolate labewbew

-LOVE IT ALL!

-good info, conversational, I liked that

-Good research

-good concept

-explained a lot in detail

-lovely introduction

-powerful meaning and information

-lovely slides

-song choice eats

-delivery ate

-you know your slides too well

-I loved it :)

-the waffling omg

EBI:

-no labubu mentioned

-go bit more in depth on some language

-timings kinda fast


3) Write a paragraph discussing how your presentation will lead into your actual coursework production. Do you need to update your statement of intent? Does your concept offer enough clarity? Is it appropriate for the audience specified in the brief? Is it achievable to film with the resources you have available? Can you add media terminology or theory to your statement of intent now you have reflected on your presentation and seen others? 

I think that I need to update my statement of intent to reach the 500 words needed and add more media terminology and ideas into it. This will allow me to get the highest marks possible on my statement of intent so that I can achieve a high grade in my coursework like an A or A*. I think my concept has enough clarity and showcases very well what my ideas are for my tiktoks and billboards. It is also appropriate for the brief as it is specified to my target audience of people aged 16-25 who are digitally native and primarily use tiktok as their main source of social media. Yes it is achievable to film, I just have to put a lot of hard work editing it afterwards. I could possibly add a bit more media terminology to my statement of intent so that is it finished to the best standard possible.